I may not understand much but I try my BEST

[~[Lara Lynn Marie Tannor]~]

Lara Lynn Marie Tannor! STOLE YOUR HEART;

They call me Missing Angel and I've shot for the moon 17 times.
You know you all love me and you can contact me via PM or MSN.
Ktxbi.

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» There Goes my Hero;

THe birth certificate reads Lara Lynn Marie Tannor
But Everyone Calls Me Lara or Marie or Tannor
Ive Been Breaking Hearts for 20 years
The say I Am trainer and a breeder
Ive Been Told I Look Like angelina jolie

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» Rock and Roll, Baby.;

I am so tall 5'4''
And I Weigh 120
Ive Bee Ninked And Pierced Butterfly tattoos on back
They always say I look like Dark hair covers down her back. Braiding it takes a while to do herself. Her hair is a dark brown and she is always noticed for it. She keeps it up most of the time in either a ponytail or a bun. But, she loves keeping her hair the length it is.

Her face just draws you into smiling at her. Eyes that show emotion very fell draw you into speaking to her. A soft feature draws your attention into her mood. The tone without her speaking either pushes you in more or makes you pull away.

Her body is what everyone tries to get. Her mind alone controls how much weight or muscle she will gain. She holds herself in a calm, yet strong notion. Her whole body is like a langauge to push or pull people in or away. It's normal to her to be this way.This Is What Makes Me Stand Out easy the angry look on her face all the time

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» Chances Taken, Hope Embraced;

I Adore music, horses, friendly people, working
I Abhor rap, hip hop, cattle, cats, rude people
I Rock writing things, riding, doing her work
I Suck staying focused on everything
I Do work out, run, walk, swim, write stories
I Want become a great rider, become a wonderful author
I Fear snakes, heights, falling, drowning
I Shut up nas never been to parties or sleep overs
I am Her kind life is something people like about her. She is kind to kids, animals, adults and friends. Any friend she has had has said she is. Mostly due to her kind nature she is taken in by people. She is never shy but will always try to help out who she can.

She is a very friendly and loving person. Her friends have said why she is to her and anyone who first meets her. She has a friendliness with anyone she meets and is never shy. She is loving towards animals mostly. Since she knows she has to be on the ball with them.

She is a smart girl with talents no one may have. She uses technology to help her with problems like making a jump on a horse. She also plans out strategies using just paper and pens. it makes everything easy on her when she maps everything she plans to do out.

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» I Know I Won't Be Home At All;

I Came From Jaka Mara Tannor - father - 45 - unemployee/dead
Martha Lynn Marie Tannor - mother - 45 - olympic rider
I Share My Dna With Nick Mara Tannor - brother - 19 - jockey
Nora Lynn Mara Tannor - sister - 10 - n/a
I Come From Oakville
But I Live Here Now Pinewood West Virginia
This Is Who I was She was born a year after her parents got married. She is the oldest of her siblings. But, she is the one her parents were proud to have. Her brother was born a year after her. Her sister was born nine years after the brother. The three were un able to figure out what they were to become.

Unlike her father at the age of twelve she started to work in a stable as a young stable hand. Her payment was lessons. She learned to muck stalls, groom horses, feed horses and to take them in and out of pastures. She became strong working there. She loved helping out and working.

As she turned sixteen the owner of the stable she worked at started giving her more than just lessons. She had been given a horse every three months without pay. She had gotten three horses all together. Her mother was now a widow and had paid for Lara to get her licence. Then on her own paid for a car.

Now at nineteen she has a new truck and a three horse trailer. She moved out and the bed of her truck held everything she owned. Which was a matress, bed frame, sheets, two dressers, clothes, saddles, blankets and a bit more. She was missing her family big time. But she had to move on.
This Is Who I am enjoys living in a new place, yet misses her mother, father, brother and sister very much.

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» This Heart It Beats;

I Lust men (straight)
I Love men who look like brad pitt
I Loathe men who look like robert pattinson
Maybe I loved non
Maybe I Didnt N/A

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» This Is How We'll Dance;

I Bow Down DUDE
I Am Awesome A grey mare walked into the land seeing the beautiful water fall rushing into water below it. She walked to it and lowered her head. She was un aware of where she was or where she belonged. She grunted and relaxed fully drinking the cool water. She was proud. Her life had been harsh. Her front right leg hurting worse than it had before her journey started. Her name my be Stormy but she has attitude you won't want to mess with when she's injured. Her leg injury was from a fight with a stallion she ran into before leaving home. She hoped to heal and take revenge on the stallion who injured her. Trooper stood watching over Smokey, Sunny, Gift and Sugar. He felt bad because Star had died before the second big move. Stormy was resting again in the shade since the sun was very hot on their backs today. He was happy his brother found a new herd to live with. He knew in just a few days that Stormy would be having another foal. He was missing Zoey. He hoped Kalona and Zoey would make the journey before Stormy went into labour. Trooper suddenly heard the sounds of horses coming. He nickered loudly to the group and watched the horizon waiting. Stormy slowly stood and walked to where the others were now watching. Sunny had no clue who his father was. But, hoped to find out today. Stormy was flicking her tail against her big barrel which was carrying a foal. She hoped it would be a filly. Trooper snorted softly and nuzzled Zoey back. He was one happy stallion now. "Oh how much I've missed having you here with me" he said. Stormy was amazed and walked forward stretching her neck out toward Kalona. She need to touch him. The foal inside her kicking harshly wishing to know what was going on. Smokey, Sugar, Gift and Sunny were interested big time seeing their family getting back together.

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Thanks Isa for helping =]

[Charlie Parker]

Just a couple things

1. How tall is she? If she's 6'4" and only 120 lbs, she would probably be skin and bones and have almost no muscle and be incapable of the work required to be a stable hand. If she's 6'44" then she would actually be nearly 8' and if she was 8' and only 120 lbs she would probably be dead. If she is 6'4" which is the more likely of the two, she should weigh at least 160-170lbs. If you meant 5'4" then 120 is fine, but please fix it to be one or the other.

2. The RP sample has to be at least 300 words as proof you can meet the site minimum. There is a word count on the side tables that you can copy and paste your sample into to check the length. The one you currently have is about 116 words.

Other than that everything is good, so just fix those things and I'll look it over again.

Thanks,
Jess

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[~[Lara Lynn Marie Tannor]~]

Okay I fixed it up

[Charlie Parker]

ACCEPTED

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