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Post by j0sh on Aug 3, 2010 15:58:22 GMT -5
Josh! STOLE YOUR HEART; They call me Josh and I've shot for the moon 5 times.
You know you all love me and you can contact me via pm.
Ktxbi.
» There Goes my Hero;
The birth certificate reads Joshua Chance Masort
But Everyone Calls Me Josh
Ive Been Breaking Hearts for18years
The say I Am Job
Ive Been Told I Look Like Sterling Knight / Justin Bieber
» Rock and Roll, Baby.;
I am so tall 5'11
And I Weigh 160lbs
Ive Bee Ninked And Pierced Nope
They always say I look like At the head; Josh has light brown, fairly long hair, with streaks of darker brown and hazel. His eyes are "almond" shaped, and hazel-brown in color. Josh has 'big' teeth as well. His neck is short (As far as neck's go..) He has broad, but not to big, shoulders. He has medium-in-length arms, and strong rough feeling hands. He isn't a muscle man, but he's still pretty strong.
Josh's legs are what make him so tall. They're longer than average 5'11 legs. He has strong leg muscles, mainly from running and doing ground-work with horses.
Josh has an extra toe, so he always wears shoes.
This Is What Makes Me Stand Out Born with 11 Toes, 1 extra toe on the left foot.
» Chances Taken, Hope Embraced;
I Adore Horses, Animals, Girls (Haha), Money, Swimming
I Abhor Working, Boredom, Being Broke
I Rock Fast (on feet), Fairly Tall, Smarts
I Suck Stamina, Strength, Talkitive
I Do Bites Nails, Swears A Bit
I Want Becoming a Cross-Country Judge -OR- Trainer
I Fear Death,
I Shut up 11 Toes, Smelly (Sometimes)
I am
Growing up; Josh lived outside of a city, and was a "city boy". He was often stuck-up, snotty and just plain rude. At age 15, him and his parents moved just blocks from PineWood Stables and so when Josh got bored, he'd go ask to help out at the stables.
After a year of helping out here or there, he fell in-love with a young Paint Gelding that was being kept there, while his owners were away. And that's when Josh fell in love with Horses.
Now, years later, Josh is a well rounded, nice, caring sweet gentleman. He's become a country guy, and can ride like a pro. He wont be bullied; and wont let friends be bullied either.
» I Know I Won't Be Home At All;
I Came From Dad; Billy - Bar Tender - 48
Mom; Jean - Stay-At-Home-Mom - 46
I Share My Dna With Jesse - 13 [m]
I Come From Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada
But I Live Here Now Bella Vista
This Is Who I was Josh was born into a city-family. Where he went to school, wore only the coolest brands, and dated the prettiest girls. He had no idea that Pinewood Stables was his dream place; at the time. When he turned 14, he moved to Bella Vista, where the real experience began.
Josh started helping around the stables; where he had crushes on girls, got kicked by horses, and learned skills that would help him in times to come. He spent his time in the main barn area, brushing out each horse's manes and tails.
At age 18, he left back to the city to finish college, where he took everything science related he could. For an extra year, he debated going back to Bella Vista, and then he met a 20 year old named Emily, and thought he had "Fallen in love". He followed her back to Pinewood Stables, thinking she was going to have and be everything he ever wanted; and learned she was a stable hand living in the Trailer Park. Although he wasn't judgemental, he didn't feel like living there...
So back to his parents he went! At age 19, he bought a place far from his parents, but still in Bella Vista. He decided to attempt to get a job, hoping to make a living for himself. (And thats where he is at the moment)
This Is Who I am None Yet.
» This Heart It Beats;
I Lust Bisexual
I Love Indipenance, Beauty, Smarts, Courage, Being Him/Her Self
I Loathe People Who Don't Shower Often, Submissiveness, Violence
Maybe I loved Emily [f],
Maybe I Didn't N/A
» This Is How We'll Dance;
I Bow Down Kid
I Am Awesome A Roleplay Sample, as if he was accepted and got his horse Nuzzle
"Shut up Nuz!" Josh moaned. The paint horse looked at him, as if to say I dont wanna work! Lets skip and go for a trail ride Josh shook his head slowly. He opened the stall door with a click, and took Nuzzle by the bridle. One hand stroking the gelding's neck, the other attaching a long lead-rope; Josh began leading his horse to wards the round pen.Startling Josh, Nuzzle let out a loud nicker, seeing other horses in a paddock not far off.
Later..
Shaking the rope lightly, and making a clicking sound with his tongue, Nuzzle picked up speed into a smooth canter. "Nice, Nuz!" He called, running towards the already canter horse. Slowing down Nuzzle, he climbed onto his back, and flew through the open gate. "Slow Down!" someone yelled; but Josh ignored the Stable Hand, he wanted to hit the trails...
Short? Yeah 
Thanks Isa for helping =]
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Post by Charlie Parker on Aug 3, 2010 23:39:18 GMT -5
Okay, real quick before I pass out from the exhaustion induced by chasing a 10 and 7 year old around all day long, I'm just going to list out the things that stand out to me.
1. I'm just going to make this the whole first section... so first off. Who is the guy you used as your picture because I'm slightly confused (and I think you may, perhaps unknowingly, be as well). As far as I can tell, that's not Justin Bieber or Sterling Knight, and, I've gotta be honest with you, he definitely doesn't look like he's 18. On top of that, he's definitely not the same guy as the one in your signature.
So, just to clarify, here at Pinewood, we do require a celebrity (or at least a name to accompany the picture) to be used as the play-by for characters due to past conflicts involving no name. This, of course, means that you will have to pick one person to depict your character. The name of said play-by should match the picture in your application and in your signature to avoid confusion. That would go in the "I've been told I look like" section where you have "Sterling Knight/Justin Bieber." Also, it would be helpful if the playby looked about the same age as the character's.
2. "They always say I look like" needs to be a minimum of three paragraphs. A paragraph is considered five sentences, meaning you will need a minimum of 15 sentences describing what your character looks like.
3. "I am" also needs to be a minimum of three paragraphs (15 sentences), only this time describing the personality of your character.
4. "I was" needs to be 4 paragraphs. You have the right number as far as "form" goes, but they could all use some lengthening, and all in all it should come out to be a minimum of 20 sentences.
5. The "I bow down" section where you have "kid" is supposed to be a word "hidden" in the rules that you have to find and put there as proof that you have read the rules.
6. The RP sample needs to be a minimum of 300 words since here at Pinewood we have a 300 word minimum and we need to know you can meet that minimum.
7. I just noticed the "I've shot for the moon" thing you mentioned earlier. It's been so long since I've done an app here (at least a year I think) that I completely forgot about that part, so my apologies for not being able to help you on that earlier. That should be your age... I assume you are older than 5?
8. I forgot to mention this earlier, but you forgot to fill out the "job" section at the top. If he doesn't have a job, you can just put unemployed or student or something along those lines.
9. Also, is he 18 or 19? At the top you say 18, but in the history and your signature he is 19.
10. Finishing college at 18 kind of isn't really all that possible unless he skipped high school and went straight to college at 16 and only got a two year degree (most science degrees are 4 year)
I think that's about it, so just fix those things up and I'll look it over again. If you need help with anything (suggestions etc.) or have any questions, please feel free to PM me on this account and I'll be happy to do what I can for you.
Thanks, and welcome to Pinewood!
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Post by j0sh on Aug 4, 2010 17:28:58 GMT -5
Okay, real quick before I pass out from the exhaustion induced by chasing a 10 and 7 year old around all day long, I'm just going to list out the things that stand out to me.
1. I'm just going to make this the whole first section... so first off. Who is the guy you used as your picture because I'm slightly confused (and I think you may, perhaps unknowingly, be as well). As far as I can tell, that's not Justin Bieber or Sterling Knight, and, I've gotta be honest with you, he definitely doesn't look like he's 18. On top of that, he's definitely not the same guy as the one in your signature.
So, just to clarify, here at Pinewood, we do require a celebrity (or at least a name to accompany the picture) to be used as the play-by for characters due to past conflicts involving no name. This, of course, means that you will have to pick one person to depict your character. The name of said play-by should match the picture in your application and in your signature to avoid confusion. That would go in the "I've been told I look like" section where you have "Sterling Knight/Justin Bieber." Also, it would be helpful if the playby looked about the same age as the character's.
2. "They always say I look like" needs to be a minimum of three paragraphs. A paragraph is considered five sentences, meaning you will need a minimum of 15 sentences describing what your character looks like.
3. "I am" also needs to be a minimum of three paragraphs (15 sentences), only this time describing the personality of your character.
4. "I was" needs to be 4 paragraphs. You have the right number as far as "form" goes, but they could all use some lengthening, and all in all it should come out to be a minimum of 20 sentences.
5. The "I bow down" section where you have "kid" is supposed to be a word "hidden" in the rules that you have to find and put there as proof that you have read the rules.
6. The RP sample needs to be a minimum of 300 words since here at Pinewood we have a 300 word minimum and we need to know you can meet that minimum.
7. I just noticed the "I've shot for the moon" thing you mentioned earlier. It's been so long since I've done an app here (at least a year I think) that I completely forgot about that part, so my apologies for not being able to help you on that earlier. That should be your age... I assume you are older than 5?
8. I forgot to mention this earlier, but you forgot to fill out the "job" section at the top. If he doesn't have a job, you can just put unemployed or student or something along those lines.
9. Also, is he 18 or 19? At the top you say 18, but in the history and your signature he is 19.
10. Finishing college at 18 kind of isn't really all that possible unless he skipped high school and went straight to college at 16 and only got a two year degree (most science degrees are 4 year)
I think that's about it, so just fix those things up and I'll look it over again. If you need help with anything (suggestions etc.) or have any questions, please feel free to PM me on this account and I'll be happy to do what I can for you.
Thanks, and welcome to Pinewood!
-Jess [/size][/quote] I understand, but I have to leave the site :/ Im having computer issues, and I'll re-do it whenever I can. |
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Post by Charlie Parker on Aug 5, 2010 21:30:45 GMT -5
Alright understandable.
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