midnight's on her way

[lostsoul]

Midnight! STOLE YOUR HEART;

They call me S lost Soul and I've shot for the moon 18 times.
You know you all love me and you can contact me via pm.
Ktxbi.

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» There Goes my Hero;

THe birth certificate reads Midnight Sounders
But Everyone Calls Me Dead, Hunter, or midnight
Ive Been Breaking Hearts for 18 years
The say I Am body peircer, and champion rider
Ive Been Told I Look Like FACECLAIM

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» Rock and Roll, Baby.;

I am so tall 5'6
And I Weigh 165
Ive Bee Ninked And Pierced tounge peirced
They always say I look like
This Is What Makes Me Stand Out My pale skin, my icey blue eyes, they say it makes her look undead

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» Chances Taken, Hope Embraced;

I Adore horses, music, animals, sketching, and alone time. i also adore rain and thunder and lighting storms
I Abhor bright ligh, sun, the heat, and crowds
I Rock im independant, and smart, can talk my way out of a bad situation and can dissapear
I Suck keeping friends and making them. being happy
I Do has the habit of playing with tounge ring and thinking negitavily
I Want to be happy
I Fear of being heartbroken again
I Shut up i was a cutter
I am PERSONALITY -- 3GOODPARAGRAPHS

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» I Know I Won't Be Home At All;

I Came From jackie sounders, 38 no job
holio sounders, 39, gas station clerk
I Share My Dna With none
I Come From las vegas nevada
But I Live Here Now pinewood
This Is Who I was she was born into a broken home. Her father raped her when she was 5 then him and her mother got divorced. she blamed herself, then her mother started to abuse her. Luciel hated it but she couldn't go anywhere else, all of her family was dead. When she turned 7 her mother remarried and the step dad molested her to. Luciel ran away at the age of eight to the ranch that was a couple of miles away. the couple that lived there let her stay with them until she was able to move. now she came here.

This Is Who I am COMMENTSONLIFERIGHTNOW

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» This Heart It Beats;

I Lust straight
I Love many things but mostly by, peircings and tattos
I Loathe guys that think their the shyt
Maybe I loved Slater shay
Maybe I Didnt n/a

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» This Is How We'll Dance;

I Bow Down to no one...
I Am Awesome

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Thanks Isa for helping =]

[Charlie Parker]

I'm not sure if this is done or not, but since there is no "Work in Progress" or "Not Done" tag on it anywhere, I'm going to assume that it is, and if not, here are a few pointers that you may want to look into, starting from the top.

1. The "I've been told I look like FACECLAIM" section needs to be filled out, this is the name of your character's playby.

2. The application needs to be fully in third person (ie. She not I or me, her not my). Also, try to keep that consistent. Some sentences start out in first person and end in third.

3. They always say I look like needs to be filled out with at least TWO paragraphs (5 good sentences each for a total of 10 sentences), this is a description of what your character looks like.

4. The I am section also needs to be filled out with at least THREE paragraphs (5 good sentences each for a total of 15 sentences), this is a description of your character's personality.

5. The This is who I was section needs to be at least FOUR paragraphs (five sentences each for a total of 20 sentences).

6. The This is who I am section needs to be filled out.

7. the I bow down section is supposed to be filled out with the rule phrase which is a word hidden in the rules that proves you have read them.

8. the I am awesome section needs to be filled out with a sample of your writing. This should be at least 300 words to prove you can post the minimum word count.

Once these things are fixed, let me know and I'll look it over again. If you have any questions, please fell free to PM me or any of the other staff members, and we will assist you as soon as we possibly can.

Thanks,
Jess

P.S.
Be sure to post in the activity check if you haven't already done so to get your name on the safe lest and avoid your account being deleted.