Post by E. Johnson on Jul 12, 2009 19:29:34 GMT -5
[ Anna ! ]
[/color]broke my heart.[/font][/center]
You have many things wrong here.
[/b] You're supposed to put your characters nickname there, not yours.2. Hilary Duff is already being used as a play-by. Also, that picture isn't her. So find another PB & matcing picture. And make it smaller, the pic is large and stretches the page.
3. They always say I look like is supposed to be 2 nice and long paragraphs.
4. This Is Who I was needs to be 4 paragraphs.
5. I Lust is your characters sexual orientation. [i.e gay, straight, bi]
6. You must not have read the rules, because I Bow Down is a word in the rules and is placed here.
7. Again, I Am Awesome needs to be 3-4 paragraphs or at least 300 hundred words. [take note of the word count box]
8. Also, change it to 3rd person. [she, her, he, they][/ul]
Fix all of those mistakes, and try again.[/center][/size]