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Post by wesson on Jul 30, 2008 1:49:29 GMT -5
'Lets waste time chasing cars
Hello, my name is Tessa. I have hugged 17 horses. I would like to board my horse here please, here at Pinewood Stables.
My horses registered name is Mako's Luminescence.
I just call her Luminol or Lumi.
Here is Luminol's information.
* Breed of horse: Gypsy Vanner
* Gender of horse: Mare
* Markings/coloring: Piebald Pinto
* Discipline: dressage and show
& Personality: Luminol is a stubborn mare, doing just about nothing for anyone other than Tessa. her twin, Heinous, is owned by one of Tessa's good friends, and they are normally kept in the same stall or pasture. she picks fights with other mares, so people are advised to keep theirs away. otherwise she is all business when it comes to winning and is a wonderful competetor.
My horse would make a fine boarder in Pinewood Stables,
--Tessa.
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Post by vampire3 on Jul 31, 2008 18:22:55 GMT -5
1)if you could add three more sentences to your paragraph, that would be perfect. a full paragraph is a full six sentences. 2)LUFF that picture ;]
just modify that and you should be good to go
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Post by feist on Aug 3, 2008 10:00:27 GMT -5
accepted.
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